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Empty State #6 – ADPList

Empty state copy on ADPList website’s mobile version for mentor profiles (mentor search section)

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So, ADPList uses this copy for its mentor search section. If you simply look at the copy, then you won’t be able to make that out as the word “search” isn’t used. Ofc, the copy is used inside the design and the user can clearly see the search bar with “Search for mentors” as the help text. I still feel the heading should be something else, like Find/Search mentors instead of “Add mentors” because then the call to action would reiterate the message.

Add mentors, in my opinion, is a copy more suited when there’s a list of mentors displayed and you simply have to tap on the + (add) icon to add them to your wishlist, much like it’s there on LinkedIn when adding someone to your network. What do you think?

P.S. Every day, I dedicate 30 minutes to reviewing UX copy for free. Email me yours if you’re seeking a second set of eyes.

About ADPList: It is a platform to network with fellow professionals from your field as a mentor or mentee. You can also host your workshops, portfolio reviews, etc. and build your brand as a thought leader and guru. (from their website)

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Mansi

An Engineer and Business grad who gave it all up for the written word, I'm a child of logic. Equal parts insanity and no-nonsense attitude, I find myself wobbling between feeling young and being stuck in my ways.

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